The room

The Room

The room was twelve paces long.

The younger man knew because he had counted them.

Left wall to right wall.

Twelve.

Front to back.

Nine.

He counted every morning, although there was no morning.

He counted after sleeping, although sleep came without night.

And counted whenever the silence became loud enough to hear his own thoughts.

Twelve.

Nine.

Twelve.

Nine.

The measurements never changed.

He hated that.

Across from him sat the older man.

The old man had never measured the room.

He sat in the same chair every day, his hands folded together, looking neither bored nor interested. He watched the younger man with the detached curiosity of someone watching rain fall against a window.

Eventually the younger man stopped counting.

“There are no windows.”

The old man smiled.

“I know.”

“I didn’t say that aloud.”

“No.”

Silence returned.

After what felt like hours, the younger man asked,

“How long have you been here?”

“I don’t know.”

“You’ve never counted?”

“No.”

“You’ve never tried marking the walls?”

“No.”

“Why?”

“Because I already know something.”

“What?”

“Time doesn’t care whether you measure it.”

The younger man hated him.

Not because he was cruel.

Because he was calm.

The younger man searched every inch of the room.

He struck the walls until his fists bled.

And pressed his ear against the corners.

He shouted.

He whispered.

And he laughed just to hear another voice.

Nothing answered.

The room accepted everything without reaction.

It was like arguing with gravity.

One day the younger man noticed something.

The old man was smiling.

Not a wide smile.

A tiny one.

As if someone had just told him a joke.

“What?”

The old man looked confused.

“What?”

“You smiled.”

“I did.”

“Why?”

“I remembered something.”

“What?”

“I’ve forgotten.”

That frightened the younger man more than anything.

Days later—

or years—

he asked,

“What if we’re being punished?”

“For what?”

“I don’t know.”

“Then why call it punishment?”

“What if we’re being tested?”

“By whom?”

“I don’t know.”

“Then why call it a test?”

“What if this is Hell?”

The old man shrugged.

“Perhaps.”

“That doesn’t bother you?”

“It would only bother me if I knew Heaven existed.”

The younger man stood.

“You always answer questions with questions.”

“No.”

“Yes, you do.”

“I answer assumptions.”

For the first time, the old man stood.

He walked to the centre of the room.

Slowly.

Deliberately.

He placed his palm against the wall.

Then he asked,

“Tell me.”

“What?”

“Have you ever actually seen a prison?”

“…No.”

“Then why are you certain this is one?”

The younger man stared.

“Because I can’t leave.”

The old man nodded.

“So if I locked you inside your own home…”

He paused.

“…would it become a prison?”

“No.”

“Why not?”

“Because it’s my home.”

“So freedom depends on what you call the room.”

The younger man had no answer.

Years passed.

Or perhaps only an afternoon.

The old man grew no older.

Neither did the younger.

Eventually, the younger man noticed something impossible.

The room had become smaller.

Not physically.

He still counted.

Twelve.

Nine.

But there was less space inside it.

Not because the walls had moved—

because his fear had grown.

The old man noticed him looking around.

“The room hasn’t changed.”

“I know.”

“You have.”

The younger man sat down for the first time since arriving.

Neither spoke.

Eventually he whispered,

“I think I’m afraid.”

The old man nodded.

“Of dying?”

“No.”

“Then what?”

The younger man looked around the empty room.

His voice almost disappeared.

“I’m afraid… this is all there is.”

The old man smiled sadly.

“No.”

“What?”

“You’re afraid this isn’t all there is.”

Silence.

The younger man frowned.

“What do you mean?”

The old man leaned forward.

“Think about it.”

“If this room is everything…”

“…then nothing is expected of you.”

“No history.”

“No future.”

“No reputation.”

“No success.”

“No failure.”

“No audience.”

“No God you can prove.”

“No one to impress.”

He looked directly into the younger man’s eyes.

“If this room is everything…”

“…then the only person left to convince…”

“…is yourself.”

The younger man began to cry.

Not because he understood.

Because, for the first time…

…he suspected the old man did.


The Room (Ⓒ J.P. 2026)

*Inspired by some obscure B list movies I’ve watched, and Plato’s cave analogy.

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